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Hold on Sis! by Sir-Raymond2k3 Hold on Sis! by Sir-Raymond2k3

It was a beautiful day, when Jenna and Kia decided to go into the woods behind her house.
On the way, they discovered a small clearing in the undergrowth. The soil looked sandy and seemed stable, but it seemed that no trees or other plants grow up on it, up to a few exceptions.
"This was once the dreaded bottomless quagmire from which there should be no escape."
Kia said, slightly aroused.
"Do you dare to go to the middle, sis?"
Kia's expression looked provocatively challenging.
Thereupon, Jenna saw slightly blushing at her.  Kia knew that Jenna never could resist a challenge like this.
"I will do it!“ Jenna said, and tooked her shoes off.
She carefully put one foot after the other. She made it easily into the center and smiled victorious.
Suddenly, the ground gave away beneath her feets and they disappeared up to the ankles in deep dark mud.
"Um ... Kia, I think I have a problem here!"
Jenna said slightly scared and tried to lift her left foot, whereupon her Right slipped deeper into the thick mud.
„I… i think this is quicksand!“ 
Jenna exclaimed in horror and struggled around helplessly.
"I like your show, you are a very good actress, sis!"
Kia grinned with an aroused voice.
Without thinking she walked up to Jenna which tried in vain to warn her sister.
„No, please! You can’t escape it, when you sinking in it! It’s bottomless!“
she moaned. 
But Kia remained stubborn.
"Don't worry, i will... oh shit!"
Kia gasped, as her feets were swallowed up by the ground.
"Oh no! You're right!"
Kia struggled like a freak until she had sunk to her knees and the suction which embraced her tightly becomes so strong, that she couldn't move her legs anymore.
Jenna tried to poke around in the mud with a 2-meter-long wooden stick, in the hope, she'll find solid ground. But it seemed hopeless. The mud was just too deep around them and it was only a matter of time before they would goes  down all the way. Kia desperately clinging to her little sister and tried in vain to lift her up.

Is someone here who can help the two girls?

 

I hope you like it!

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:iconrena999:
Rena999 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2018
Ok, I save Jenna. Someone, help Kia : D
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:iconmattjohn1992:
mattjohn1992 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Great Art. Is Nice
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:iconrena999:
Rena999 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2017
juri in quicksand lol
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:iconwwei23:
wwei23 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2017
Where's Lina?
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:iconwwei23:
wwei23 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2017
Where's Lina?
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anakin3338 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2016
This would make a good series ;)
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SonicUS1000 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, that looks great. ^w^ I'll rescued both, but blush at a time. :)
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acekasbo Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2015
This one is so great. I'd love to see a continuation of this scene :3
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water-bug-62208 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2015
Nice drawing and wonderful story!

Jenna looks lovely in her short-sleeve mini-dress, and the subtle highlights you've placed in hers and Kia's hair are a wonderful touch!  Your shading work on these women is most outstanding, and the colors are beautiful.

I also like how you drew the portion of the quicksand that they're sinking into darker than the surrounding mud...  it gives a nice impression of how they've broken through the drier top layer and have sunk into the wetter, gooier mire just below.  The overall background is beautifully done, and I like how you drew the sun shining down upon these trapped ladies.

Thanks for sharing!
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eel227 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
'shoots a lazer in a circle around them causing the earth to become brittle' 'tosses both of them in a tree' 'floats off'
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FascinationJorugumo Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome my dear ;D^^
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PM2K Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015
Love the story, and the art is just stellar! :D Hopefully, we'll see more of these ladies in the future. Or is it less? ;)  
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:iconsoulofcursedsword:
Oh my God... just when I thought your drawings of Jenna and Kia in these sticky situations couldn't get any better, you draw this and completely prove me wrong.

First, the story that perfectly compliments the artwork. Thanks to the combination of story and art, I can perfectly imagine the whole scenario in my mind. I can see what happened just before this, picture how exactly they got stuck. The story also gives me confirmation as to what the art is trying to portray, and it's definitely letting my imagination run free as to what will happen as they sink deeper in the quicksand (especially when they get to their crotches in the quicksand. I'd really love to imagine what they'd do at that point... I'm a freaking pervert, I know...)

And as for the art itself, it depicts just what you wanted; Kia and Jenna both sinking in a quagmire while Kia selflessly, yet in vain, attempts to pull her little sister out of the trap with her bare hands, knowing that she too is sinking, and that her actions may only cause the two of them to sink in faster.

I just... I... I don't think I can praise you or your arts nearly enough. With every single quicksand art you've posted here, you've taken my quicksand fetish to a whole new level, and that's something that I'll always be thankful for. Keep up the exquisite work; I'll be waiting to see what other marvelous art you create next.
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xdarkwingY Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Jenna is so cute... uff ~  am i the only one with a crush here? ^////^'''
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DoingTheJukes Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2018
He's got 270,000 viewers, do you really think you are the only one who has a crush on in my opinion the most kawaii of the three? Not a chance bucko. I'd throw Kia and Lina in a pit of quicksand and run off with Jenna if given the chance.
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xdarkwingY Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
dude. :DD watch out who/how u talk with :D oh,well but u wouldnt know tho.so nvm :DD
besiiiides i think that comment is pretty old, but yeah, jenna is my fav too~
i was making a fun comment back then , just simply expressing that jenna's my fav~ 
oh. he called me bucko. oh thats bad :D welp, nvm. ^^
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tnnttrjr Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
no. XD
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ConsoleMe Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2015
I'm just a pervert. FnaF Icon [40] - Bonnie Intensifies FnaF Icon [37] - Foxy wut r u doin?? 
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:iconxdarkwingy:
xdarkwingY Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
*kappa* im too... bu-but jenna is so cuuute~~~ *sparkle eyes,of course blush and kind of a perv grin*
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ConsoleMe Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015
While I usually am perverted, I can't help but feel nothing but concern for these two girls. I think I've fainted. 
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talianagisan Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
wonder if jenna is in her heels~ if she is id save her and her sis and then have lesbian makeout time with both of them! ..... oh god that idea has just gotten me so horny >_<.
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anakin3338 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2016
Mee too!
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RadicalDanny Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015
Adorable girls ^^
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PorcupinePower Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
*drools* wow you have great ideas of drawing!
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Silkyfriction Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
They look very scared and vulnerable Oops! 
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Silkyfriction Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WHOA! This is x2 better than your usual work :D :D
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0-0master Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  Student General Artist
That position is not going to help them in the slightest......should I get a rope?
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ScorpionSplash Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  Student Writer
I guess I COULD help. But where's the fun in that?

*sits down at the edge of the pit*

maybe in a little bit
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:iconnoblestudioz:
Noblestudioz Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015
After some Grand theft Auto V PC
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:iconscorpionsplash:
ScorpionSplash Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  Student Writer
I would join You but I find two girls sinking to be much more entertaining
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:iconnoblestudioz:
Noblestudioz Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2015
Yes but GTA PC is awesome.
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ScorpionSplash Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2015  Student Writer
Well yeah. But but... *points to the two girls* look at them!
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:iconxdarkwingy:
xdarkwingY Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
*looks at the picture... and my blush goes up~ * @/////////@ ... >///<......O////w////O
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MrBlackGoo Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015
Finally! You did it! A full-fledged art with more than one person! La la la la 
I very love your style and this work is awesome! Also your stories deserve special attention. It's really good addition to every your work, that gives it more dramatic color.
I think you can make some colorful comics on base of this work. It is would be cool!
Sorry for my poor English, but I should tell any thing about it! Meow :3 
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roukaryu Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Looks amazing! The sisters are posed in sensual angles and their expressions are lovely!

(This has potential for an RP. Would you be interested?)
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thinez Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2015
I know i'm a randomer and this is an old post but well I certainly would be.....
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:iconroukaryu:
roukaryu Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I just sent you a note.
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anakin3338 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2016
I'm interested too!
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Victordraw Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015
yes!me,i dan help!
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